Evalutation of the Pitch

Yesterday's pitch came as a shock to me, my team and I weren't nearly as ready as we thought we were. We struggled to elaborate on the production schedule section, we didn't have a clear idea of what/when we was going to do a particular task. The storyboard that we produced lacked coherence, the structure seemed to be off and confusing to us and the audience. We were advised to change the order of it by Mary due to the weak explanations of the plot. We are currently decided to edit the storyboard on Wednesday 6th February in Dan's lesson and hopefully start recording on the 8th on Friday. In the pitch, we had done a prezi. This made the layout clear and easy for our audience to understand. The font were clear and readable, it had all the relevant information about our movie and images and videos of our props and movies that inspired us for our moive. If were to repeat this task again, I will constantly rehearse the things that are going to be said and say it in professional manner. Also, I will informing the other members of the group of what they should say and how they shou say it; taking the role as a leader. From this, I've learnt that the physical presentation is not always the most important thing when giving a pitch.